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All Comments on 'Adventures of Delmond: Let's Begin'

by Delmond_Magnastone

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BenLongBenLongalmost 17 years ago
Diamond in the rough

Wow, Del, masterful first story. Takes me back to my own beginnings. A few typos (shutter is something that goes over a window, shudder is an uncontrollable twitching)but otherwise superb! Loved it all.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Well, since I'm in it I will leave a comment....

"Lucy" here-

Ahhh, memories. Your recollecion is pretty good even after all these years. A few creative liberties, but overall pretty much like I remembered it. Thanks for the story!

XOXOXO

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