All Comments on 'Adventures with Alice Ch. 01'

Absolutely loved the story! Needs only a slight bit more buildup. Other than that I can't complain. Keep going!

It's a good story--very good. Five star.

But the author chooses to give us no information whatsoever about themself.

Very disappointing but I'm hoping for more good stories from him.

about the author.

...Leeds as in Leeds United, Holbeck, Stourton, etc?

Not that it matters, just curious (hence the monicker).

I live in the US but am from somewhere near Wakefield.

Nice beginning - please continue.

Thanks,

N

Can't wait to read more...