All Comments on 'After Closing Time'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 19 years ago
good effort, original story

Arousing and original story, but could use a good editor to remove spelling and grammar mistakes. Good effort.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 19 years ago
Cream

I'll never be able to look at a carton of cream in the same light again!

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