All Comments on 'After Graduation Ch. 01'

by mtnman2003

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Foxterot7aFoxterot7a1 day ago

I liked the story but wished the author had used better language. I assume this was/is/becomes a love story. Maybe I am old school, but lover do not talk to each other the way the mother and son did in this story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Super cum swallow. Those with mom sucking cum, then swallowing it for the ones that turn most men on. I often fantasize about having a beautiful long blonde haired mom with brown eyes looking at me sucking my prick and drinking my cum down. I've had a number of women that have drank my cum and this story reminded me of them.

LAROCLAROCover 11 years ago
AND SHE WAS RIGHT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

MOTHERS ARE THE BEST FUCKS EVER. MOTHERS BETWEEN THE AGES OF 35 AND 50 COULD KILL A YOUNG MAN IF SHE PUT HER HEART IN IT.AND THAT'S JUST A PUSSY FUCK. ADD HER MOUTH AND ASS, AND THE YOUNG MAN IS DEAD MEAT. THIS STORY IS HOT, READ IT. . LAROC OF AGES

AnonymousAnonymousover 12 years ago

is there a part 2 cuz i hope u plan on write more story since it pretty good

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Fantastic story.

I enjoyed this story very much. I hope you will post the next chapter to it soon.

terrydavidterrydavidalmost 14 years ago
Geez, "oldwayne" are you in PMS? Anon's are part of the dynamics that make this site so interesting yet fucked up!

Get over the "anon's" or are you that "thin-skinned"?

The author takes a risk putting their stories out there - most are clucks, fags or indifferent and just once in a while, a gem or great author gets credit for a well done story. This site has a few great authors and tons of fucked up "want-to-be" authors who actually try.

oldwayneoldwaynealmost 14 years ago
Anonymous critics, all, suck little boy cocks.

If you don't have balls enough to say it to someone's face, without hiding who you are, why should anyone pay any attention to what you say. Most of you wouldn't know a good story, if you had it shoved up your rectums. OOH, you would like that wouldn't you?

mtnman2003, you write really good stories. Thank you for what you do and thanks for another fine story.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
I stopped

when you said 9" cock. Give us a break will you!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Those weird hyphenations...

You shouldn't hyphen every number. Hyphens go with compound adjectives. If you are describing a simple plural, that's all it is. One bottle, two bottles. 1 bottle, 2 bottles.

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichalmost 14 years ago
A great story

Mom knows what she wants, and it's the big cock of her son.

Good start and I hope that the author continues with this hot couple.

Thanks

FRSWRITERFRSWRITERalmost 14 years ago
yes very hot

very hot indeed need part 2 and 3 or so mom sounds hot to go

kathy2b46kathy2b46almost 14 years ago
oh yes

quick and to the point (of his nice cock) turned me on ,good one

blackfenblackfenalmost 14 years ago
welcome back

really good to see you posting again...like this new story

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Very good story. Let his girlfriend join the fun!

THank you!!!

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