All Comments on 'After School'

It's not bad story for a first entry but you should pay more attention to what category you submit to next time.

Great character development. I really liked Terry. Very erotic and believable.

Do more with these characters. I can imagine a sequel where Terry gets herself in too deep.

very real characters, intense peer pressure that leapt off the page, incredibly descriptive sex scenes. I appreciated the lack of dialogue which somehow magnified the eroticism

this story was fantastic, it took me 2 days to read it because every time i tried to finish it i would end up cumming all over the place, very talented writer

good shit here, i had 2 restrain myself from beatin off, maybe next time she does some lesbian?

A great story for a talented writer. I'm waiting for a series to see how Terry continues her sexy adventures. I support the idea of a lesbian scene suggested before and suggest an incest adventure back at terry's home. Thank you fin.

great story! i want to be a girl! :-) (and i?m a man and i?m lovin girls!)

I am a girl who worked professionally while in university. The reasons for getting involved are real but the pace of getting involved is probably a little slower than I remember. The story is much more erotic than real life though.

This is not really my kind of story but I enjoyed it nevertheless. After reading your recent submission, 'Touching Eileen', I had to see what else you had done. My rating on the submission is only a 75, but thats because of the story itself. My vote was a 5 because of your writing skill. It was a thoroughly enjoyable read. I'm going to look at your other works and I hope you have many more stories to tell.

I was also led here by Eileen, and I'm happy to see that one was not a fluke. I'm off to read the rest of your work.....

Wow, this is my second story by Fin -led here by his story of Eileen. Very H-O-T HOT! I'm glad no one was home today as I fear I would of shamed myself.

I, too, was lured here by Eileen, and was delighted to find the quality of the writing as good as the first story. Love the character development, the details & the description

I look forward to reading more, so please keep writing! You have a talent for building the tension and excitement. Although, if I'm going to cum that hard every time I read one of your stories, I may have to pace myself!

- a horny 35-year-old Canadian woman

Like anonymous of Canada I too started working professionally when at university and my first time was when a friend's date wanted two girls. I felt out of place that first time but I liked the money and was going solo within a week. I agree with her the story is more erotic than it is for real though just occasionally.

hahaha i had to do that when i was at uni, but where i worked i only done massage and hand relief, but it was cash, that was the main thing, only had to do 2 days a week, sometimes i done sat mornings, when they where short of girls, but it was a great experence,

An awesome story of sexual awakening. Got me off wonderfully.

12 years after written this story is still fresh and Hot as ever! Really enjoyed reading about Terrys introduction into being a collage call girl. What does the future hold for her and Vanessa? I certainly wish this author would fill us in on the rest of their story.

Wonderful read, thank you for it.

Terry REALLY got into it!

Turned her on, on, ON.

Written so well, It turned some of the commenters on also!

And the writing....almost gave you a "you are there" feeling.

Was a gaffe, though, in the first encounter with Jeff.

When they meet Jeff, he is already barefoot.

Later, as he disrobes, he takes off his shoes and socks.

Still, a minor distraction, so easily

⭐⭐⭐⭐⭐.

First fin tale.

Not the last.

Thanks.

Paul in Oklahoma