All Comments on 'After School'

by msapril81

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
How Delicious

More please... More about his enjoyment of the pain and Her drawing so much more from him on every level..

Gratefully,

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
What he'll do?

Is report you. Both to the school and the Police. Years in jail. No career. Shunned by the community. How's that working out for ya? Terrible story, poorly conceived and poorly written.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I liked it and want more. However it would be more interesting from the students point of view.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Keep wrting

Your first story great and I'm afraid this one pales in comparison. I did enjoy it and look forward to more.

gspanker051gspanker051about 10 years ago
Good Read

Good readi I wish their would been a spanking

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