All Comments on 'After School Meeting'

What are you setting up a novel? We want a little more then a partial intro. Come on, give us something to read. Good subject but where's the rest??????

There's something to be said for the art of tease, which is what you seem to be doing right now. However, keep in mind that teasing only works for so long then one loses interest. Don't tease your readers too long.

It's great so far. I can't wait for more. I am hoping there is going to be more.

What there is, is very good, but you left us hanging. Please give us the rest of ther story! Thanks

Get to it and stop being a virgin.

keep things going slow, tease us!

I'm anxiously looking forward to Chapter 2.

I'm anxiously looking forward to Chapter 2. You need to knock up your teacher, regardless of your social positions or ages. She sounds "HOT"!

I'm anxiously looking forward to Chapter 2. You need to knock up your teacher, regardless of your social positions or ages. She sounds "HOT"!