All Comments on 'Aftermath Ch. 04-05'

by AylahAyres

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AnonymousAnonymousover 11 years ago

nice writing, and looks like it will be a very good story

Foster_KaizenFoster_Kaizenover 11 years ago
Like the story

Nice going, cant wait for the rest of the story

fanfarefanfarealmost 10 years ago
so far, so bad and that is good

AA, I hope you will regain your incentive to continue Aftermath. Maybe consider reworking it, fix a few of the errors and re-post as a novelette?

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