by Krypt_Mistress
MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM fucking brilliant!!!!!
Oh, this is a brilliant story. It read like a Hollywood movie played out.
Did not expect her to return with a vengeance!
Constructive criticism only: the head hopping threw me off a little. I change scenes if I need to alter perspective, even if it overlaps. This story, of course, had to be seen from both as the executioner does not survive his own summoning.
The title definitely drew me in.
Thanks for writing!