All Comments on 'Aftermath of Innocence'

by Krypt_Mistress

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AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
what did i think?

MMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMMM fucking brilliant!!!!!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
captive audience

Graphic and terrifying! I couldn't stop reading...

RavishingRavishingabout 15 years ago
Awed.

Simply put, I'm in awe. Innocent evil.. it's intoxicating to read.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
Wow.

Soooo. This was amazing. Umm. Part 2? That is all. :)

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago
Brilliant!!!

Oh, this is a brilliant story. It read like a Hollywood movie played out.

Jeannette_SavageJeannette_Savageover 5 years ago
Loved it!

Did not expect her to return with a vengeance!

Constructive criticism only: the head hopping threw me off a little. I change scenes if I need to alter perspective, even if it overlaps. This story, of course, had to be seen from both as the executioner does not survive his own summoning.

The title definitely drew me in.

Thanks for writing!

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