by kendra1980
I love reading your stories.... the visual is very realistic....
XOXO
That was incredible. I felt as if I was watching the whole thing. Wow... you are awesome... and I can only imagine if this is how you write, then sex with you in person would be a rubber leg experience... if you could even move after that. WOW.... (wiping the drool of my beard)
I love a mutual masturbation session. And you finished it off nicely!
Write some more!
I'm so hot and I need to touch, I want to please you too, so I won't touch your pussy.
Probably should be "I won't touch *my* pussy."
Criticism out of the way, I'm going to go back and reread it because I want to jerk off again and think about my wife walking in on me looking at her pictures. But in my fantasy she's going to look a bit more like you.
Great story, very hot and vivid, loved it, keep the stories coming. :)
Keep the stories and your readers cumming... Ace
Kendra,
Wow…I love your story. I had precum just thinking of you fucking someone face (Wishing it is mine).
I could almost taste you :-P
Kendra, that is really good, I loved it. My mind alternated between seeing myself and JD and picturing you and your hub. It was great, right amount of eroticism and yet the romance was there. Thank you!