All Comments on 'Against Her Will Ch. 02'

I guess every prostitute must LOVE their job, along with the fears of being raped, beaten, STDS, kidnapped, tortured, KILLED. Yep, every woman and teenage girl who have been forced into prostitution must be living the dream. And the drugs the do to numb the pain is a myth.

You are a complete retard.

Some of us know this is only fiction and it is just your thoughts for a story line. Your doing well on this just needs to be longer chapters with more of what you think she is thinking and doing. There are some of us that know what a submissive mind can fall into and how someone could break(or split into 2 personalities) just from being raped then forced to do things that they would have never thought of doing before, so please keep writing just more story line please. I have read most of your other writings and you are pretty good. OK.......

Cinnamon_Spice

The premise isn't that bad it's your execution that is awful. Susan is as three dimensional as a sheet of typing paper. And you descriptions of everything else is just as flat and dull.

You have no "feeling" to your writing. In the end I didn't care what happened. She could have been a lump of clay and been more interesting.

It needs to be longer and edited thoroughly, but I love the story.

Really would like to see a chapter 3 to Against Her Will

Please make a chapter 3

One warped and sick puppy. Fixated on making all wives whores and sluts. Of course hubby has to be clueless and their are no consequences for her bad behavior. Just another for the cucks and sluts to get their jollies off on. Ridiculous

My gf confessed to me after almost a year together that every month or so she rents a hotel room and gets her ass creampied by multiple strangers for money. She said it was a turn-on being used by strangers and she said she could only climax fully with a man she had never met before stretching her asshole while being verbally abusive to her. So I sold her to my drug dealer and he pimped her out