All Comments on 'Against The Wall'

That was a damn good story, keep up the good work!!!

You did a great job with the small touches, like his beard stubble on her neck. Also, loved the people cheering them on outside the stall. Danger of Jack finding them, etc... great thinking, great writing!

She needs to break up, tell him why, let him move on with a woman who deserves him, she belongs against the wall haveing sex with strangers, like a slut.

Another hot story! I felt the need and the passion. You're the best.

Everybody knows Jack but no one tells him - ya right!<P>

Your whore was why your work fell down. Such an attended event on the floor and toilet without his awareness is contorted - or he is a wimp. Neither of which endears us to your chosen work.<P>

Is this sick male humiliation cucking crap your normal fare?<P>

With your talent you should have "H"s on all your stories - so it must be your choice of subjects huh.

Loved it!

Great writing with detail and such that made me feel like I was one of those people in the bathroom listening... or a fly on the wall!

I think a sequel to this would be a great idea.. just sayin*

Damn, that was hot. One of my favorite stories here, I think. Fantastic sense of urgency, desperation... Loved it.