All Comments on 'Aideen's Rescue'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
needs lessons

This author needs a basic class in human anatomy. His "aureolas" is totally wrong the proper terms are "areola," "areolas," or "areolae."

AzPilotAzPilotover 14 years ago
I thought it was very good

One mispelled word out of a thousand or so does not a problem make. I thought it was well written, better than many I've read today.

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