All Comments on 'Alejandro's Song'

by SydneyBlake

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estragonestragonalmost 12 years ago
Oh You Syd!

You patented hot and sweet. Great story, but what else from La Serenissima? But there will be one, and only one, quibble, via "Send Feedback". Great to have you back on Lit. More!!!

Soul_childSoul_childalmost 12 years ago
Syd!!!!

You"re back!!! I'm so excited I missed you ;-) if this story is anything like How to Save a Life I know we have a lot in store for us and the tags on here have me super curious I can't wait to indulge lol

Kudos on your achievements I'll check you out on Amazon

A new journey begins...

ambush184ambush184almost 12 years ago
welcome back!

Nice gentle read. I like your style. I'd bet you've been to a place like this one.

D_LynnD_Lynnalmost 12 years ago
So sweet & realistic

I love this story. It feels so real to me.

Thanks for sharing it, Syd.

- Dakota

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 12 years ago

Great to see you back and still in fine form. What I enjoy about your work is not only the sexual content, but the way you make your readers know and care for your characters as individuals. You really have a gift.

HankDolworthHankDolworthalmost 12 years ago
I was worried...

that her negative self talk would ruin a good thing. I was happy to see she finally figured it out. Lovely ending too.

MaddieKimMaddieKimover 11 years ago
Thanks

for a great story!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

I had trouble getting through this. I kept picturing Cheech Marin holding up a fistful of flowers while Ace of Base played in the background. Lady Gaga came into it too... of course. Funniest image I've had in a while.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 6 years ago

Little bit of a strange story. I wonder what “Llano” the story was talking about. The description of the land and the weather just didn’t ring true to me. Sorry, but the story just didn’t work for me.

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