by dagan732
Again, you have devised such an enticing world and the characters in it are sweet, sexy and so normal, you feel you know them - or, you want to ... !!
I love Josh and wish him the best; he tries so hard to get his life on track !
Alex is the walking wet dream and Josh just can't help but fall in love with him; but has Alex fallen for Josh ?
Oh man, I hope he doesn't make Josh suffer ....
Super job....I want to be under Alex right now! THANKS!
But you should consider having someone read it over before posting it. There a few typos here and there, and though some people can read over it and not find the fault, others don't have that luxury. It breaks up the story because I have to now figure out how the sentence should read best.
But otherwise this was a great story, keep up the good work.
So glad to hear more & longer chapters. 4 chapters is a good length. Don't worry about whether some people like longer or shorter... keep going the way you are & all will be well. Really like this story line of Alex & Josh. Can't wait for the next two chapters. Great job.
I have gotten drawn into this series. It is very good, very well done. I eagerly wait for the next chapter.
Peace and joy,
Shell
I am loving this! That was sweet, brutal, sad... and hot above all else. You really have something here :)
enjoyed it! WOW! That was pretty HOT! :)
Me too, I'm really liking Alex & Josh....really cool dudes! LOL.
Keep up the good work! Cheers! (:
keep going ~ like it so far.
how many chapters are you thinking?
really like Alex & Josh.