All Comments on 'Alex and My Cousin's Wedding'

by hotwet73

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
Enjoyed it. The brevity enforced the speed of the

Lust

Dirty_Old_Man3Dirty_Old_Man3about 15 years ago
Good story

I hope that you will write about their next meeting. Use a little more description of the surroundings to add length to the story and to add to the word-picture you are creating.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
raw

I could see the lust and passion. It was written like an old friend telling a dirty secret.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 15 years ago
great

that was very hot i loved it

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