by SirSinn
Can't wait to see what happens next,please continue with this story line soon.
One of your best chapters cannot wait for the next chapter to see what happens.
Can you do a version of Kascha in this? Busty Asian 90's porn star who dyed her hair AND bush bright blond, so yeah, I fell in lust with that exotic combo.
Really liked the writing, but there was no real incest to speak of, no emotional connection between the characters.
...really was enjoying Alex's sense of amazement at the situation, which I feel like gets a little lost here, in favor of conventional porno-speak. But whatever, it's still great. :)
I love the stories, the second set a bit better then the first tho......
any chance we will get to see Alex bang his Agent.. beyond the video snippet..
maybe a little revenge against Daphne if nothing else for lying to him...
and we definitely need to see the culmination of the video shoot..
deffinitely liked it........ waiting for the next chapter in anticipation
Chapter 3's already written and should be up in a couple of weeks. Plenty more to come, people!
I hate to you, Sir, but your Incest just isn't 'incesty' enough; at least according to 'Anonymous 07/14/14'!
"Emotional connection"? Since when did the act of fucking a blood relative become NOT 'real' incest if there is no emotional connection?
I can see it now.... 'Er, um, a defense, your honor? Well, I, er, well, I wasn't 'in love' with my mom, sir. Or my sister... you know, when I fucked them? Yes.
That is my defense: I didn't love them, so I'm not guilty of incest.'
<<<CLANG>>> (That would be the sound of the cell door closing, AFTER they convicted, and sentenced, your ass!)
Keep up the writing and, thanks for the read. You've got a good blend of plotline and smut goin' here. Solid mechanics of writing, (it's nice not to have work hard 'editing on the fly' so you can have a read.)