by bisman33
seems this writer can only do rushed stories WHERES THE BUILD UP IN THE PLOT??
lovely job again, really enjoying it, dosen't matter if it's a little short it's still a really good read, looking foreward to part 3 =D
Just a bit of information to writer, it's impossible to know how many babies are to be expected 2 months. Most of time sonograms cannot tell until 4 to 5 month period. I'm a father to 3 yr old twins, which myself and wife didn't learn she was having twins until 5 1/2 months into her pregnancy
you might be father of twins but I am ultrasound tech. and twins are easily detectable at 8 weeks (2 months) gestation. as a matter of fact they are detectable already at 5-6 weeks with really good equipment and endovaginal scan...:-) You just didn't have very good tech if he/she didn't see them on earlier scan.(just sayin')
Anyway, awesome story, can't wait to read next part.
Finally a love.story between siblings that actually stays with them. Know there was some saddnes with their parents but I loved this. Hope you write more about these two further down the line. What the twins were life as.they grew and when they found out about parents. Hope you do and keep just the love of the original siblings there.