All Comments on 'Alexandra Makes The Grade Ch. 03'

Needs some editing but original and an enjoyable read.

He's coming off as a hypocritical idiot to an extreme with the bitching about the evils of pornography, cheating and breaking curfew (wtf?), while simultaneously having sex with a student in a relationship that would get him fired, excommunicated, drummed out of the community and possibly jailed in some places.

Maybe that was deliberate, that we're supposed to realize from him calling himself a jackass that he's a hypocrite, and that's okay - but you're hitting us the reader over the head with his obnoxiousness. I've read the previous chapters, and they were much better written because that isn't in it.

My name was in the story! Im so cool! :p

Make more chapters! pleeeease! Maybe one where he makes love to her!

Write more chapters, please!!!!!!

This is awesome!!!

More chapters please!!