All Comments on 'Alexis and Tyler Ch. 02'

still wonder why this isn't in Loving Wives

The next chapter will probably land in Loving Wives.

The story moves well, has good descriptive sex and is cleanly written, I even see sentences! (Something which often devolve into run on sentences or phrases--a personal peeve of mine). My only suggestion would be to be careful about positions when moving them, as one scene describes her riding him, and he puts his hands UNDER her ass to turn them over so he is on top and some other similar unclear moves. A minor thing, but for those who "see" the scenes we read, can cause a break in the flow.

Looking forward to the rest of the story--and hopefully others.

I think it's in the right section. The story is actually an age different story, with the marriage is incidental and there seems to be no love, only avarice or security.