by bamadude55
Keep going with this. This first chapter made me horny as hell. I realy think you have a good story going so far keep going. I'll be waiting for the next chapter.
Chapter 2 Preface
Billy receives a visit from his alien lover and things heat up between Billy and Sally.
Excellenmt start ten no follow-ups! Seven Years Since And Need More! ??
With stories that are not completed after a year any readers should give it 1 star. This will bring down the stories overall score to a fair value.
Half a story or an incomplete story IS NOT worth 4.37 stars. I believe that readers read the part story and vote before realising that it is incomplete and will never be finished.
1 star is fair for a part story. 5 stars, best story on here, is not. This story must have received 5 stars several times as it’s score is over 4.
So yet again I say that Literotica should have a function in the story submitting that marks a story as incomplete and awaiting further chapters. Then when the story is finished the author marks the final chapter as such and the Literotica computer know. However if after a set time an incomplete story is still not finished then the computer automatically deletes it from the database.
This one should be deleted.
bamadude55 wrote a great story - it's obvious he won't finish it - Somebody please come in and write a great follow up to a great lead in - Declare yourself here and everyone will be able to fing you and your SEQUEL.