All Comments on 'All Aboard!'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Quick -Post a followup

We need to know what happens next.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
But..!*

Gave you a 5 star and a 100 "but" you never ate her and you got 2 BJ's. I guess you are saving that for Chapter 2 or 3,, right.?? Very good story but we need 'more please'.! Thanks.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
dream

Every boys wet dream. Can they not continue their relationship?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 8 years ago
Polish

Visualizations are very good for your stories, but you would benefit a lot with a proofreader.

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