All Comments on 'All (Almost) in the Family Ch. 02'

I doubt you can go anywhere with the story, since you've made it quite believable --- with little or no room for either pseudo parents or pseudo kids to maneuver around.

The Dad sounded real, in his fatherly false righteousness that we know in real life happens from our dads; the mom sounded real.

The two kids are horny, young, exploring kids. The only "way out" is to take the story to the novellas length, making it a "romance" of some type.

Leave the mom and dad alone, though, since they seem to be real, genuine parents who are caught in a weird situation with two unrelated kids living under their roofs who seem to love each other as siblings but who also sexual kids who want to explore their sexuality,,,

Again, good job on a good short story about sexuality in weird social circumstances.

Still so hot! Where WILL 03 lead.......

Still not incest, tho.

Lukas

don't read this story if you like stories that are complete and finished this is another loser writer that can't finish what he started

Love it when are you gonna finish??

once again we get left hanging with only a partial story. this ass needs his ass kicked and his shitty half stories deleted. IF YOU AREN'T GOING TO POST A COMPLETE STORY THEN POST NOTHING, HALF A STORY IS WORSE THAN NO STORY AT ALL AND THIS IS MUCH LESS THAN HALF.

Really liked the story but the wait for part 3 is killing me, please Wright the 3 part already. Please!!