All Comments on 'All in the Family Ch. 05'

Please continue, and hurry with the next chapter!!

Can't really say anymore . Thanks for a great read . Can't wait for chapter 6 .

It was when she was calling Jake her husband as dad, referring to the kid's dad, but I reread that portion twice and figured it out.

A very eroic story and the storyline is fantastic.

I hope to see more soon.

Thanks for the read.

Please please please hurry with chapter 6, best written story I have read on here in a very long time. Such passsion!

Excellent story -- well written. I found myself getting caught up in their emotion. Looking forward to the rest.

I will write my story after reading yours on chapter 9