All Comments on 'All Is Fair Ch. 15'

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deeheredeehereabout 10 years ago
Loving this story!

Not only is it a fun read, but I'd give you a 10 for the way you've posted a chapter daily, Instead of making your readers wait forever, the story is not forgotten and keeps us salivating for the next chapter. Well done Sherrybaby!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Mom!!!!

My favorite character this chapter is Daphne. "Okie dokie."

Littlecat76Littlecat76about 10 years ago
Love it

A twist to the usual werewolf / vampire story and love that you post so often. Also loving Mummy dearest about now! Hope once this is finished you continue with Andrew finding his true mate!

QNastyQNastyabout 10 years ago
Wow!

More more!! I need more! I'm so in love with moms right now..she's a bad bitch!

I hope this story gets atleast 20 chapters or more. I don't want it to end!

SweetGaspsSweetGaspsabout 10 years ago
Team Daphne!!!

Ii think I cheered when I read Daphne threw that punch!!!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
WOW!

Hate the fact you left us hanging on a cliffhanger! But well done! Love this story and I laughed when Daphne punched Rebecca, about time too I must add!

Please continue writing even after this story has ended. Would like to know what happens to Andrew now with his bond broke.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
lol

I LOVE Daphne!!! Who said mommas can't be badass and great moms?? Also, Brooks is awesome. Sooo smart. Look forward to more!

MabelCinnamonMabelCinnamonabout 10 years ago
Ok you redeemed Brooks

Now he's starting to move like an alpha... And Daphne just got more interesting. You're doing so good, I'm really enjoying this one. Now it's time to make Helena a badass too!

ariesgirlariesgirlabout 10 years ago

I hope Brooks call and wait for help before he goes down. Victor is crazy and crazy people are unpredictable.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago

The last few chapters have been very good; you are improving.

SultrychocolatesistaSultrychocolatesistaabout 10 years ago
Enjoying Your Story

I think you are doing a great job. I really like the way your

Story is headed. Keep it up!

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Okie-dokie

You surprised me, in a very good way, with mama Daphne's special talent. Thanks.

Yves

AnonymousAnonymousabout 10 years ago
Loving it!

I am really enjoying this series, it draws the reader in and makes you want to know wht comes next. Keep up the good work, but please, please can you change 'leafs' to 'leaves' ! Niki x

NinarghNinarghover 9 years ago
Oh Daphne!

I think I like her even more now. I picture her as a Helen Mirren's character in RED now, and it's brilliant.

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Hi! Still writing, but lately more on tumblr and ao3. Sort of fallen into The Walking Dead fandom, will write originals again soon

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