All Comments on 'All Mapped Out'

Time to get rid of the cheating,slut, skank, BITCH

I don't know why authors can write a story like this in fantasy-land and then use a condom in the action. Fantasy stories are dreams and dreams don't need birth control. Hence the zero I gave you, on an otherwise very erotic story.

Nothing more than pure stinking garbage.

If you're gonna have fantasies, is this the best you can do? Really? Four kids in the house and the wife tramping it up like this? This was the fantasy? Even with hubby's implied knowledge this was pathetic. Sorry.

in the house with children in the house. Time for a divorce and wife loses custody of kids. Hope hubby had house wired and recorded the evidence for the trial. She can say he agreed, all he has to say is nope I thought she was cheating and here is the evidence. Not only that but she behaving this way with our four young children in the home. She is an unfit mother and the children should not be allowed to visit overnight with her, ie, supervised visitation with the children. And the wife should pay her share of the child support.

I think the intent of the story was for the lonely wife to find sexual satisfaction.If she is typical of most women, after having 4 children, her body is probably not one of a playboy bunny anymore. Most likely she would have stretch marks over her abdomen, and it was stated she had a big ass. If she breast fed her children, her breasts would a little droopy.I'm not saying that she isn't sexy anymore, but for a stranger to look at her naked body, it might be embarrassing for her.

With all of that said,it doesn't diminish the fact that she still needs sex. She still has all the wants and needs of any woman who still has the fire in her gut wanting a stiff cock. If I were her husband, and was away from home for extended periods of time, I would rather have her fuck a known friend, instead of trying to pick-up some stiff cock in a bar.If that is what it takes to make her happy,then she would have my blessing to satisfy her needs. The only request I would have, would for her to be discreet, and to make sure the neighbors, friends, children didn't find out.I think that the use of condoms took a little away from the story,( semen dripping out of her pussy ), all of the messy visual images that could have been described. It's a good well written story, and I enjoyed reading it very much. Thanks for the good post....Rich

Short but boring.

So you go out and get fucked because he isn't there for you!

Jeez woman, at least wait untill the kids are old enough to find ahome for them selves. If you don't love or respect your partner what are doing still married? I forget, it's because of the kids isn't it? you don't want them to not have a father, on that subject, are they his? I think he should know don't you? it's only fair.

It takes a program to know the why and wherefore of the whole event. the sex is very hot and if everyone is in agreement what's the problem?

I hope the slut gets caught and put naked on the street!

Guess what that will bring about.... It won't be "Peace in the Valley"

Husband works his arse off providing for her and the children.

How does she repay him?

Premeditated dishonour and disrespect to him and the children. Constant betrayal by a cheating cunt who can't keep her whoring legs closed until he gets home.

Buy a vibrator! Download porn!

What a fucking cunt.

Loved your story,it brings back many memories (good ones) My wife and i had an agreement she could fuck my friend as often as she wanted.My friend would fuck my wife as i ate breakfast,lunch or late at night after the kids had been in bed for an hour or two.They did everything one would expect to see in a porno movie. My wife looked forward to there meetings.At night i would sit in the lounge room watching TV while they went to the bedroom to fuck for an hour or two.I loved to clean her up after he had gone home (two houses away) to his wife. The amount of cum he used to pump into my wife surely would have left nothing for his wife.They were fucking (in every hole) with no condoms as my wife can't get pregnant for three and a half years.

4 kids and a living slut. Wonder if the kids are bastards.

If the husband and wife screw around on each other why fucking be married that is a fucking joke what kind of example are you setting for your children they are never as clueless as you think.