All Comments on 'Alone at Last'

It was going so well, until the last paragraph. Did I miss something? Rotten trick to a reader gets a rotten score.

Is this all there is?

That dream sequence that is written as real until the very end is not only a tired, old device, but leaves the reader feeling as if the author has been lying to him the entire time. Lemme give ya a hint: that does not make for happy, satisfied readers.

Well, regardless of some of the other comments, I liked your story. It reminded me of my own real-life experiences with Annie, and lady who lived in my own neighborhood years ago.

We too played and teased with each other for months before we finally got down to fucking each others brains out. She was everything I'd fantasized about, and I don't think I disappointed her in the least.

I'd give anything to do her again, but alas, I have since moved away, and no longer fuck around on my wife. Damn.

Well, regardless of some of the other comments, I liked your story. It reminded me of my own real-life experiences with Annie, and lady who lived in my own neighborhood years ago.

We too played and teased with each other for months before we finally got down to fucking each others brains out. She was everything I'd fantasized about, and I don't think I disappointed her in the least.

I'd give anything to do her again, but alas, I have since moved away, and no longer fuck around on my wife. Damn.

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