All Comments on 'Alone In The Office'

Yes this was pretty hot,if a little short.

But still very erotic. You did a good job describing the scenes. The dialogue was also well done, had plenty of emotion and excitement to go with the action. Just would advise/recommend more back ground, detail, character descriptions in your next writings. But again, enjoyed reading it.

Many Feathers

You write well. Give us more next time.

This is good, but a little rushed. You write well, but you need to develope the characters a little more to make it more interesting. Give them personalities. This would make the story a little longer, but would also make it a better read. Keep up the great effort. Thank you for the story!!

I wish I ghad been the one to find her its a great story and I look forward to reading others from you. please keep up the good work