All Comments on 'Alone With Alison'

I really loved this story, but I didn't think there was any way they could let their love fade like that in the end! :(

Not a bad story, but the spellcheck should have been used.... lots of typos

to many pages not enough content, no bang for my buck

That's because you're a wimp wimp at reading! I do have to agree about the ending, it shouldn't have ended like it did,but that's just my opion!

cut the usless rap out and it would only be 2 pagws long and a much better story. i really didn't like the story because it was to wordy making it longer than needed but also because of the cheating which is never acceptable. if she had been single either divorced widowed or never married it would have been acceptable but not with the cheating.

I disagree the story had the logical conclusion, the fact is that most incest ends in a mess with no winners

Amen to that, the ugly truth is that whether is siblings or parent-child incest once it ends so does the closeness between the two of them, since they tend to never speak to each other again

this was an amazing story your realy talented and look forward to reading more or your storys

You can't satisfy everyone, but I liked it even though there were far too many typo errors in the story. But you'll never satisfy everyone anyway. But you shouldn't have stopped writing if that's what you like to do. But, you can always write more if you wish.

The old fart

I love your work read most of your stories you do these well only real issue is some typos which are understandable as spellcheck doesn't check certain things and sometimes we are overcome by the content of the story to focus on typing I have been reading these things for over 12 years and when I say you do good work you can count on it meaning something

Sex stories are for erotic stimulation and this is one of the hottest descriptions of sex ever. Unlike others, I love that Ted has a big cock and Alison is addicted to it. In fact, I hope you write a continuation of this that might involve them making a baby.

One of the very best. Thanks

Nice little story. Sometimes we don't realize what is available or appreciate it.

Great story. I think it's even more exciting that the sister is married. It's more wickedly thrilling fucking a married sister.

Excellently written!!!!!!!!!! Really exciting!

Way too many errors that interfere with reading without losing my place.

(8/10/2021)

Your story was both erotic and poignant. If Ted wasn't her brother would she have left her husband for him? This goes right into my most believable stories list. I believe that husbands should strive with all their ability to make their wives happy and never take them for granted, and communication is the key. In the back of her mind, she dreams of someday being taken back into Ted's arms again, and it would be Mike's job to make sure that dream fades into a distant memory. If he does not strive, then he deserves to lose her, IMO. 5 stars from me. I see that you're still submitting your stories after 9 years.

Ending makes me rate it low.

This is one of the scenarios that I think happens a lot more often than most people are willing to admit. Very nice read.

Too bad the story ended with the brother and sister moving back apart and not continuing their physical love for each other. But it was steamy hot and loved it

By far one of the best stories on this site! Wow

8letters was right!! I can see why you're one of his 2 favorite authors. This was a GREAT story!! Thanks for writing it.

Beautifully written story. I'm just disappointed that it had to come to such a logical conclusion . . . .