All Comments on 'Always Home Ch. 02'

Beautifully written! I had to keep reading, though I wanted them to be happy, you worked it just right. Tugging at my heart strings, playing those strings like a harp. I even left my cock alone for the first chapter, that's saying something. lol But then you let them have such a hot, exciting sexual experience, had to take my cock back out and stroke along with them. You are much more an author than a sex story teller. I do hope you will continue this, and let me look into their lives and enjoy their explorations for a long time. You are really good. Thank you, Richard

Type of story we don't see here very often any more. Thank you.

What a beautiful, sad story. Keep it up. Can't wait for more chapters.

Again, you've done a very good job of placing us in the situation. Thank you.

Love this story!

Great story. Good and steady plot. The only criticism I have at this point is that the lovemaking scenes are almost glossed over. Not enough descriptive dialogue, needs more "heat". This is Literotica after all.

Not that I wish I'll on the characters, but I just love it when a big event brings two siblings, who are already close, even closer thorough sexual co-dependency.

As for Marnie, she is not air-heade, as seen from her smartass quips, so I'm pretty sure that she will catch on to the fact that her elder siblings are now sexually involved with each other.

While the story is deliciously good (whew!), I'm longing for more descriptivness during the sex bits ;) when they first had sex it was basically a fade to black, curtain drop, exit stage left! Hehe! I was like...wtf? Ive been robbed!! Lol ;)

Well thanks for the good story so far, Im off to the next chapter! Oh, btw, I found your story because you mentioned in a comment on another story about your writing! No telling how long it would have been before I ran across you otherwise!

Very well-written.

Second time, upgraded my score to 5/5

It is quite brilliant you know.

The storyline is just getting better and better. 5/5