by Margin Walker
I needed to read a story where someone was so angry & jealous that he needed to react and do something about it and not just feel bad about himself or cry to sleep. This isn't the usual category of stories that I read, but I found this one good.
What a f@#$ing HOT story!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Sheesh Margin, you have some mighty fine talent!!!
I'm going to remember this one for years to cum!! ;-)
Your writing is more passionate and DEEP....Keep Up the Great work !!!
Sweethang
I loved this story. Except for the end. Everything seems justified in being broken. Nothing can be fixed...
It ended as it did. He is a dangerous piece of shit that should be locked up. People who do this often kill the one they love! However you pulled the punch, a man that gets drunk, stalks the former girlfriend, forces his way in and rapes her...piece of shit.
He'll beat and rape her again.
Sort of like the story of young people having sex, with the preface that everybody is over 18, when from the story they are clearly under 16..
Hope he enjoyed his few minutes of sex (rape) as he is probably going to spend a few years in jail for the assault and grievous bodily harm of the other boyfriend.