All Comments on 'Always There'

This ends in a very sweet romantic sort of way. It's quite endrearing really, besides being a really hot story.

... Cute,sweet...Needs some filling-in.You never described the narators body,'N only briefly her NEW girlfriends body.But a cute short story...

Love your story, it was romantic and sweet. I hope you keep up the good work

I have no interest in people whose comments include a "should have"

Either you like it or you don't

I did--I do like "First time storys" Best, regardless of catagory--

I also like one page storys best--I have a friend with whom to pass back and forth the ones we really enjoy

I will pass this one on to her

I really like the romance that you put in your stories. I am really tired of stories that only revolve around sex. More, more, more!