All Comments on 'Amanda Ch. 01'

keep it up as i did while reading this story. loved it and can't wait for chapter 2.

Please contiue, sound like a lot of fun coming your way

Where is the incest? This chapter should be fetish or crossdressing or humiliation. Until she sucks his dick, it's not incest.

what is he a tranny total waste of time.

WTF, didn't make any sense.

You have a desire shared by quite a few young men. Often, it is an older woman who can help.

Please continue...

This story might be miscategorized.

Can one assume that there is a point to this story, because you have not got my attention as yet, nor would it seem a few other readers.

Dude is too docile unless he actually wanted this. I kept cracking up each time his sister added more girl stuff. It looks like a fun evening, or whatever is in store. This is a funny story, keep it up.

RS

This was a great start. Please keep it cumming. I loved it,, wish I had a sister like Amanda. If you would like any help or idea's.. kinky48186@yahoo.com

im sick of reading these great intro's and the never seem to get followed up. this one was really well paced. if u continued this pace to complete submission then u will hav urself an amazing story. GREAT

Please finish the story!

This is a good story so far, please add more chapters! Soon!

story and want to hear more but why is the submission happening. When I was 18 I would have had a damn strong reason to have submitted to this.

Unfinished

Great start! I hope you add some more.