by caprine
Language is a bit stilted, and the sex would have benefited from more detail. Made me right horny though!
Their early years of experimentation was very exciting and the build up was good . The reunion and ending were great however I find the strip club scenerio a little hard to accept with the 69 act . Otherwise ...great .
Pretty good story with detailed descriptions. I prefer a little more detail on undressing.
jmjdriver
This is the first of your stories I found. I plan to read more of them,
you started good but ruined it when they married others they kept saying even after getting married that they were each others one true love but that all went out the window and was proven to be bullshit since they each married someone else
swapping just proves none of them has any love for any of the others. IF you truely love some one then you never need any body else ever. they kept saying they were each others one true love but were obviously just lying to each other because if they were they never would have married any one else. you wasted your time, our time and the sites space with this trash.
To the anonymous writers turned off by the situation described: sex is only tangential to love. You can be very much in love with someone, but if an opportunity for sex with someone else arises, you take it and it doesn't diminish your love for someone else one iota. If you develop love for the new person also, you can still love another just as much. Accept that fact, and you grow enormously wiser and happier. And who you love or enjoy sexually has nothing to do with manmade morality, only with your perceptions.
your views are why this world is going to hell so fast. to the writer keep the shit out of th incest area this belongs in the group or nonerotic area it was a total turn off.
Dont waste your time cause it's a bunch of in love you, only want to be with you and then marrying someone else who they love then hey fuck my wife while I fuck yours. Fucking garbage