All Comments on 'Amateur Girls'

you go far too long between stories.

Nicely done! This story leands itself to a follow-up.

Ooou, if only straight girls would come on to me like that! I liked your story, even though it seemed unlikely to happen. (Why would a straight girl choose to make a lesbian porno, when there's plenty of money to be made doing a hetro-porno?) But your writing skills have merit; I loved your sensual imagery. The sex act itself was hot, but lacked enough dialogue to suit me, and seemed only one-sided passionate. I agree with the reader above that wants a sequal.

Jane

Unlikely but compelling; and isn't that the true heart and soul of erotica? LOVE this one; keep them coming!

Bring it on!!! Good action, but much too one sided needs to have the other one get into doing it too!

Right!! Let's have a sequel depicting just how satisfied and grateful Trisha is.

Excellent work. I would like to some more work in this cat.

Fantastic with the way you had a plot and all of the key elements to fiction writing. Way to go. You had me riveted to the very bottom as to how the story was going to be resolved.