All Comments on 'Amazing Vacation Ch. 04'

I loved the way you made tiffany kate's little slut. This series was sooooo hot! It has me so anxious for more of your writing. Keep it cumming, I really like the way you write. Maybe you can bring out another chapter of neighbor girl, I really like how you turned that innocent little girl into such a slut. Kisses:)

Thank you, from: miss silver766

Almost cartoonish but cartoons have some wit. This was pure drivel:trite, banal, and boring. You have no talent as a writer. You used the word "pretty" seven times in one paragraph. Buy a thesaurus.

I can forgive all your faults but one. A total lack of passion. That's unforgivable,

Love it! Pls write more such stuff!

Most of his stories are worth 2.5- 3 stars. And there he is with 4.7 !!! I will contact webmaster to inquire how it is possible. Surely they would have some protection against this type of dishonesty !!!

keep them coming, you've got a great sensibility. very hot.

Thank you, I thoroughly enjoyed reading the story. I’m so glad there was no wimp cuckolds and demeaning behaviour (as is common in a lot of stories it seems).

A great story...in its entirety