All Comments on 'Ambush'

I enjoyed your little tale and just wish there had been more of it.

You have a good story going, why not teach the girls what their backside is good for in another chapter. Thanks for the post....Rich

i've read most of your stories. some are so-so. some are impossible. some are gawdawful.

this one has potential. become an expanded writer.

all of this from an english major too lazy to use the shift key in the current boredom created by the ice storm.

would have liked the story more if threre was only the siblings

So your not a virgin? Then get the fuck off me your worthless whore and take your skank slut friend with you and go back to fucking all those other boys. Whores!