All Comments on 'Amish No More Ch. 01'

However I did enjoy it! Maybe a second chapter?

i enjoyed this story and hope to hear more of what happens. thank you for sharing your talents.

i did enjoy it and i enjoyed the thoroughness of it. at first I was taken aback by the abduction however I saw that although you had listed it as a abduction it was well thought out and bringing her dark desires to light I would defiantly read a second chapter.

Please continue with this story line. It could go on for several more postings and still keep its appeal.

The story line was great and yes there were a few errors but I found some in a James Patterson novel also and few on here are with out errors, so the critics have no beef. I am sure they are not into BDSM otherwise they wouldnt be so critical as it is a great BDSM story. There taste probably is more along the Tabboo line. Now who is sickist. Anyway keep writing I am waiting to here the end.

It focused on the relationships which I like, always wanting to know why people want to live life in service. Don't know if the author knows his subject or not, but it was enjoyable from after the kidnapping onwards

Thought this might put this in the top lists where it belongs

I think this was a good, well written story. Much longer then I usully like on here but interesting enough to keep me reading and I am looking forward to reading the other parts of the storie.

The only sugestion I have is when you are writine about the same person and you keep bounceing back and forth between their slave name and their real name in the same paragraph it is a little distreacting. So if you would please just use either or it would be much easyer for me to read.

I really enjoyed this story...although it was longer than what I normally read on here. As a person who prefers to be a "pet" this story really appealed to me.

Really enjoyed your story! I genuinly hope for a part 2! There were a few typo's but nothing major. Well done you!

This is in the noncon section for a reason. I loved everything about this and cant wait to read the other chapters

As a Dom I may not live as he does; but I did listen as I appreciated how he does to