All Comments on 'Amnesty Program Ch. 04'

This story has heart, is hot, and I like the characters. I'm impressed that this chapter is less sex focused than the prior three. It avoids the awful cliches extant in most of the writing on this site. I wish I had been Jason, while the story is a fantasy and spares us the day-to-day banality and grind, but doesnt pander to the "penthouse forum" misogynist bimbette dropping her panties tropes. I look forward to future installments. I wish there were adult films this intelligent and entertaining.

You should write it out to novel length, you'd get published. You do excellent work,

Thank you.

I am in love with this story. Love, I tell you. You've done a fantastic job layering the plot, building the characters...my one complaint is making us wait so long between chapters! But, given how well written they are, I think I can forgive you for it :)

Just gets better and better. I can't wait for the next one!

Each chapter gets better. While the sex scenes have always been good, this chapter was excellent because we see real feelings starting to intrude past the lust of the first chapters. I'm seeing them even more as people I'm interested in. Keep up the good work and try not to keep us waiting too long for the next chapter!

You are a very creative story teller. I am enjoying this series very much. Keep up the good work and writing..

Please keep going. Great characters

I check back like every week for an update on this story, I love it, so I'm still waiting.

I echo the sentiments of the others please provide more chapters, I need to know how their relationship progresses, who else joins the program, etc.,

I'm curious to know what happened with the roommate and the guy she met at the party

More please

Great story! Please continue

You have many readers vacuumed into Jason and Rebecca, brainy geeks that are much, much more and together as you have written them evolving.

Awesome!! I'm a Disabled Veteran that's now a full time college kid and I see kids that could be these 2, it's great!!

MORE!!!

about Emily and Nathan. As well, I'd like Jason's mom to catch them in foreplay.

The premise to this series is not realistic, but it is closer to reality than many erotic stories and except for how fast things developed in chapter one, the CHARACTERS are very believable.

I like this series far more than I ever imagined I would in the early paragraphs of chapter one!

Please give us more.

Thank you for this series. I am really thrilled to see how it continues.

Great dialogue, and I find smart very sexy...!

Just looked to see what else you have after I finish w/J&R

Hope you've not retired from writing...!

Well played, all 'round. Unique premise with well thought-out task/reward twists to the tale.