All Comments on 'Amy and the English Teacher'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
"Pee-pee hole"? Really?

Is he an aggressive man or a 5-year-old?

AnonymousAnonymousover 10 years ago
"Slammed her face into the desk"

Really? And she still is interested? Sounds like your only sexual experience is with prostitutes.

"devoured her dirtiest slut hole," is pretty good.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 9 years ago
good but odd tone switch

I really liked it, not bad at all and definitely what I was looking for in terms of teacher/student. Only complaint is the story isn't sure what it wants to be, in my opinion. At one point he's forcing her face onto the desk and in another they're making dick jokes and laughing. It'd be better if the tone was one or the other- more dark and forceful or lighthearted and funny. But together it was a bit weird. Other than that, pretty good.

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