All Comments on 'Amy Ch. 01'

Good start and story line. Watch spelling (waste instead of waist). Simple misspelling take away from a good story if there is too much of it.

Mwah!

All the nice kinds of evil. Keep it up. One problem is too many guys and not enough girls. I know you are getting to father Brian eventually, but you need more ladies. Thank you.

first you need an editor your spelling leaves much to be desired. No brother calls his sister a bitch in the middle of sex. Sad to say, not erotic at all.

so many things to do,,so many people to fuck!!,,,more please,,,and get someone to proof read and get the syntax correct!! don't want to conjugate your sentences when i am horny!! this is soooo wicked,,,love it,,,a nun! how about that!! will be waiting impatiently for more chapters!!

a bit wordy but good looking forward to ch.02 and a good romp with daddy and uncle.

I can't wait for her to fuck her dad and the priest