All Comments on 'Amy's Smile Ch. 04'

They better get together in the next chapter.

I was cracking up so hard that my face was red and my cheeks hurt like hell! I think by the time i finish this story, i would probably be carried out by the paramedics for lack of breathing! You have a brilliant sense of humour!

This is a great story. I really like your writing and your humor. I can't wait to read more.

This is very good writing. I'll probably finish this in one enjoyable session.

great read funny guy.. hard to believe that you're not male!

Now that can be called as FANTASTIC story.

I really enjoyed it.

No doubt 5/5 for sure.

-- jokerjck

Wow! I'm blown away by your writing...it is unlike anything that I've read on here, and I've read a ton! Your writing is Funny (the Humor is so well written), Light hearted, easy flowing and absolutely All Consuming! I've read straight through and thought I'd pause to thank the author... So Thank You jfinn!!! I find a book like this on Lit and I find it hard to believe I'm reading it for free...So Thank You Very Much! I hope your generosity is repaid ten-fold : ) Alright, I'm off to Chapter 5!

Plenty of substance, humor and satisfyingly literate.

Thanks for your writing !