All Comments on 'Amy's Smile Ch. 05'

I love the whole series!!!

Please continue.

Peter

This is my fourth time reading this series. I'm still holding on to the hope that you will still be releasing chapter 9. Even though it has been about 3 years I'm not giving up. PLEASE FINISH IT!!!

Thank god they finally have sex and omg it was amazing. Off to read the next chapter.

Jayne, you are amazing. I'm reading all of "Amy's Smile" for the second time, and have turned a friend onto it. I am positive she will enjoy your story as much as I do.

Gary

Though "wow" can be a verb, when Amy said "Wow" after kissing Charlie it was technically an interjection. Otherwise the story is great keep up the good work.

~logophile

The logophile below is definitely correct. In this story the word "wow" is not a verb. It is actually a, well, uhh, err, ejaculation.

Superb chapter, with the sex scenes also advancing plot and developing character. Great writing.

What more can I say :-) I was on the floor at the comparison of cucumbers/zucchinis..

Manos the Hands of Fate is a freaking awesomely bad movie!!! This is now my favorite story. Not for the sex, but because of MST.