All Comments on 'Amy's Special Valentine'

Please, please get an editor! I think I could put up with "was cuming", but the anus musCLE is the SPHINCTER, not the "splinter" which sounds soooo painful. It's difficult to enjoy a story with this many mistakes in it.

Give it a damn rest please! This is NOT a fucking book club, and these stories are FREE, so quite pissing everyone off and creating an environment of citicism that is sure to drive away any more potential submissions. No one gives a shit that you are some kind of a literary and english grammar major.

Hey man: regardless what you called it, I knew that you were fucking the little girl in the ass. (nuff said). I enjoyed reading the post. Thanks ....Rich

Kegel is the name of the exercises you can do to strengthen the pelvic floor muscles. Mussels are seafood. Isn't English fun!!!