All Comments on 'An Accident, The Internet, A Hotel Ch. 02'

You've continued a truly lovely story. You're a gifted writer who's mananged to capture both love and lust in the same unhurried way that has characterized everything you've written.

You hinted at Amanda's wanting to be with Mark and his girlfriend, Beth, and you introduced Rachel into the story although she didn't play much of a role. Perhaps you could involve Beth and Rachel in your next offering.

Thanks again for an delightful story.

Julie

disgusting subject is rescued here by exquisite writing ...

Great writting and very touching. I can't figure out why people read stories with subjects that they find disgusting! I thing they're the ones with severe problems.

Excellent story that could just as well have been written about two neighbors of differing ages. I like your style and enjoyed the story immensely. I look forward to your next story.

Nice follow up and ending to a great story. What I especially liked was when Amanda asked him if he had a few minutes to spare and instead of having an encounter for us to read, had us remember the scene from part 1 when she masturbates for the 1st time w/ her son on camera. That scene is still one of the most arousing I've read here in ANY story. Brilliant use of making us use our imagination. Steve

very well done.

there was sexual encounter after the play in he alley. All the signs led to it. A little spontaneous outdoor sex never hurts.

Have read a few dozen stories now and there have been quit a few good ones, but this one to me must rank among the top 3 of being the most erotic, if I had to rank my top, say, 5 or so stories in Literotica.

For a thankless thing in Literotica, this was a lot of work on the author's part.

One short comment on specificity:

It is a fictional story, yes, but for discussions sake:

given a situation like this (and it doesn't have to be incest, it could be just an older, incredible attractive woman and a younger man) --- it seems like the author's really saying the pregnancy was really by the Mark, not be her husband. Little white lies like, "Well, mm, I'm planning to go off the pill tomorrow,,, so,,, I could be pregnant,,," seem to be clever attempts to cover her tracks (*morally,* that is) --- a pretence to ignorance, so she could make herself believe the child is really her husband's. If there's a small possibility, in her mind, it is okay,,,

If you factor in her reflections on "insamination" and pregnancy before and after ,,,, I'd say it is by Mark and the author's clever enough to NOT have Mark be some smart alec about it, to simply let Amanda decide how she's going to think in her head,,,,

Yes,,,I like subtlety better than crudeness (even if the story, ironically, is anything but; but again we can say that's simple extreme eroticism)!,,,

But, again, regardles --- this is an extremely well put together piece of erotic fiction. It's almost entirely within the woman's head that we're made privy to what's going on: the focus was mostly on eroticism, taboo, and moral dilemma over-come and not so much on hurting the respective spouses of the two involved.

Again, thank you for the incredible work!

Excellent story. You built up anticipation and kept me excited about the next events throughout the story. The actual love/sex scenes were incredible. Your stories are far and away my favorite on the site.

That was a fabulous story that ever read thank you, please put more another similar story like this one. crh

I don't know whether to laugh or cry!

Congratulations, JT, on another superbly written masterpiece of emotionally-literate erotica

A woman truly in turmoil. Fucking her kid and loving his father, and then discovering she loved the kid more and then wanting ANOTHER kid from the VERY cuckholded father. As hot as this story was, I could not help being facinated by the psychological musings of the sexually frustrated mother. How she waxed endlessly on her justification(s) for having an incestuous affair, actually dismising the word incest entirely, when it made the situation less comfortable for her to accept. Then in the end, when I thought she had finally come to her senses, starting the affair up once more, when it had become more or less a memory, made me remember my own mothers oft intoned allegory...'What a tangled web we weave...when we practice to deceive...' This piece deserves a more instructive ending. Either they reach a crisis point and end their illicite affair permanently, or the author bends to the will of the rather large codrey of pervs on this site, and find some literary reasoning for including the WHOLE family in on the "secret", with the anticipated titilating, and totally depraved result... Few writings on this site have provoked such highly charged, philosophic examination as this one did for me. Perhaps THAT is why it rates so highly with the readership...do yuh think? I am NOT holding my breath!

when I saw the aurthor's pictuire I decided I wanted to read all of her stories. My god! I had three orgasms! It was unbelievably erotic. Thank you for a great sexual story. You really got me off with that one part of holding her vagina open and letting her son cum in her. Jesus I went off like arocket!

Read your whole story loved it so much,i only wish they could have stayed together as man and wife.

very erotic story- dilemma tuff

sex descriptions VIVID- more

I don't usually read incest stories, but someone suggested this 2 parter to me and all I can say is WOW.

Nowhere in any erotic story have I read anything as intense or as hot as the scene where Mark masturbated and ejaculated into her. I had to read that one section 2 dozen times. Absolutley amazing.

very good syd, aus

Loved the story - sensitive, thought-provoking and fucking erotic!

first one. Thanks for the story.

It's not often you read a story with so much insight in the human condition. This is writing is one a different level. One that makes us feel what the true consequences of our decisions can be. A truly a satisfying tale. Thank you so much!

Your writing keeps me wanting to read more and I can't get anything done around the house. This could be a good thing though but the reason I will keep to myself. Thank for the stories keep them coming.

Both chapter 1 and 2 were excellant believeable and greatly detailed.

Is there more to come would love a follow up say ten years down the line and did Amanad have another child that may be Marks.

Hope to read plenty more from you

Excellent story and it's a real love story also.

I wish I had mwritten this story! First rate.

The first chapter was the best one, the next 5 sort of let me down. Especially this 5th chapter, but I understand it was to give it some closure.

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loved the story lots of sex and mom wasnt a slut for more than the son and had a very good story going on liked it alot keep writing your great so far

Enjoyed, as I have with your others, the depth of the storyline

Well done! Read it long ago and had trouble remembering where. Glad I found it again to enjoy again.

Without the incest element this would a well-written but rather standard older married woman having an affair with a younger man story. And with just a few edits, it could easily be one. Other than being told that Mark is her son, there is little evidence that he is. He seems to have little connection with his father and sister. No feelings about his father especially as to cuckolding him. (No shame? No guilt?) He's just so matter-of-fact about everything. Also, there seems to be no real past between him and his mother. It's as if he sprung into her life as generic college-age sex-stud rather than being birthed and raised by her. (Doesn't she have baby/child pictures of him around her home? Memories of him as a child?)

This is still an extremely well-written and HOT story which stands nearly 16 yrs after it was first posted as one of the best on this site. Yet, despite the author's stated desire to get into the psychology of its mom character to understand her motives, it ignores and/or glosses over some major impediments as to such a relationship ever happening. It could have been fleshed-out a lot more.

It was great until she went back to her husband. It should have been her sons baby

Fucked up woman, fucked up son, fucked up story. She in no way deserved her husband. He in no way deserved his father. All the deception, all the cheating, all the complete disrespect. It's all just too fucking much. I wish Dad had found out, and killed them both.