All Comments on 'An Accidental Incident'
by MrReaderMan
- 55 Comments
Anonymousabout 9 years agoLiked the story and how the flow went for a fairly quick read but who is Sarah??? Made me laugh tho about shooting a huge load all over mom's face and how that would make for some great conversation later! lol good start just give it a quick re-read before posting or round up an editor but either way good job!
Brad (can't remember my logon)
Anonymousabout 9 years agoDamn man; please finish its a really good intro into something more between them
Miniwandabout 9 years agoI'm sorry but you have to continue. This chapter was too short and too exciting for you to stop here. The accidental facial was just too much fun and very well brought. You really have something here and it would be too bad to stop.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoYou have a good start to a story that could become really interesting. I hope you will continue with it.
MeToo2about 9 years agoReally like the story, please ocntinue.
But you have to get your names straight!
Sometime mom is called Carol, and then she is called Sarah ....
Eric_Shiftabout 9 years agoYou do have the start of a story, but to say this is a standalone is wrong. Your ending is too open.
For a partial resolution, at least have him explain to his mum and sister.
Otherwise I think expand this into a very close family story. The mum didn't scream at him, and the question from the sister could be construed as curiosity, not condemnation.
Hope this helps.
MrReaderManabout 9 years agoAuthorI can't believe I missed that, I thought I caught them all! Thanks though! I had an extra character at one point who I cut out and I just replaced her parts with the mother, which made the name inconsistent.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoThat's a really funny scenario, mom searching for her fork under the table and coming face to face with her 19 year old boy's big fat hard on--and Dan blowing his young balls right in his startled mother's face. Then his sister getting an eyeful of her brother's cock still half-hard and arching over his balls. Dan's penis is becoming a common sight for the females of the family, just as it should be. The kid's hot young balls are filled to the brim, and he's got to shoot his sperm like all the time. How long before he realizes that his mother and sister both have the perfect nature-made sperm-catchers right between their legs? Mr. RM better give us a sequel pronto or he's going to be sorry.
MaternalyObsessedabout 9 years agoWhen the shock wears off Mommas gonna
beat his ass black & blue.
Not because he painted her face.
But because he left a mess on the
floor for her to deal with......
HAHAHAHahaaaaaaa
Anonymousabout 9 years agoFunny situation... in part 2 Mom should come up with a fitting punishment.
Anonymousabout 9 years agoA truly new idea for the beginning of a mom/son story.
Very well done.
The son now needs to get the mom used to seeing his cock erupt all over her and then the next step in the seduction of the mother would be......
Anonymousabout 9 years agoOne word for this story. Only one word needed... Continue.
RavenOnCaabout 9 years agoThis has such potential to be a HUGE hit. Looking forward to where you go with it. I have to admit, it wasn't what I expected at all....but am looking very forward to reading parts 2,3,4.......
Great Job...
BlakeBlossomWoodabout 9 years agoIts rare that maintain mass and rofl at the sametime but you did it. Please don't leave us hanging OP more!
Anonymousabout 9 years agoGood story with many possibilities but you need to re-read your work before posting it this way you can fix your mistakes such as his Mothers name.
taco1085about 9 years agothis is a great start, now build on it with all the characters..... this will be funnn
Anonymousabout 9 years agoGod that was so funny, I could barely read the last part for the tears of laughter. The only thing funnier was the grandmother in American Pie
Goodmeal69about 9 years agoyes please keep it going great humor and situation. Let's us know how this all evolves and or turns out.
Anonymousabout 9 years agogreat job! keep it going with a slow build up. reluctance from the mom is great!
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoYou need to write more. Even if it's not a sequel. Brilliant!!!
Anonymousover 8 years agoI actually laughed so hard. I don't know what I was expecting, but it definitely wasn't that.
Anonymousover 8 years agothat was 1 of the moast funey stories on this site, I have read 4 a long time , well done
Ghostrider9over 7 years agoThanks MrReaderMan,
You're right . . . this story borders on bizarre.
You right well . . . but the scenario is just plain hilarious. I loved it.
Only problems were the brevity, and me choking with laughter. GREAT STUFF.
Anonymousover 7 years agoLiked the story it was a more "realistic" type which are better. Hope you write part 2 soon. Maybe an idea is to have the son go inot the bathroom to check on his mom and to apologize and he sees her there trying to clean her face. He tries to apologize but she cuts him off angrily and tells him to get out. Then he goes to his room and she comes in to confront him and she is mad. He tries to explain and she eventually lightens up but is still disgusted. More time goes by and everything eventually returns to normal but the sister think's that mom actually let her son cum on her face because that's what it looked like. Even though the mom explained it was an accident. Then one day the son brings it up to his mom because his sister keeps bugging him about it and he asks if he can do it to her again and let the sister watch so she will leave him alone about it and it will at least seem like that's what happened so he can stop having to deny it all the time. And the mom saying no way and then the son persuading her into doing it but she's super reluctant.
Anonymousover 6 years agoThis is one of my faves, it's a pity that 1) there isn't a follow up and 2) there aren't more stories like this one
Anonymousalmost 5 years agoMade me laugh so hard tears were coming out my eyes. Just wonder what happens next in that scenario.
