All Comments on 'An Accidental Seduction'

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Mebtaz2000Mebtaz2000over 9 years ago
Nice beginning

I like the seduction. Hope you plan to continue the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Very nice. I hope there will be more.

Just one little peeve: ... hands to the snap of the bra between her two boobs.

Most women have a pair; delete 'two' and you're done. Thanks for a good tale and please continue with it.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
More

Great start to a series

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Home run...

This one leaves me wanting to read more, PLEASE!!!!

For a shorter story I thought it was very good, I look forward to reading more of your stories. I will share this one with my wife, I think she would enjoy this one too.

MrConflictMrConflictover 9 years ago
Well written

A great start and i look forward to more! Keep it up man

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago

wow hot hot hot another chapter

rightbankrightbankover 9 years ago
so much for commitment to her marriage

but not to worry, It won't last much longer now.

at least she gets some help around the house,

till she doesn't live there anymore.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
A+

sir after I read your lovely story I have to agree with the first post too.. her married won't last long but you know what.. you got potential as a good writer

I found this story Super hot and well done! I think you need to continue this one as far and as long as you can!! good job!

4yourpleasureiam4yourpleasureiamover 9 years ago
Why shouldn't it last

Hubby is away on business and both she and Billy need the sex. I can't wait till he is eating her like a good son.

p1967kup1967kuover 9 years ago

Great story, would love to see a sequel.

RecHikerRecHikerover 9 years ago
Very nice start...

I'd also like to read more of this adventure and see how Janet and Billy move on from their first encounter. Maybe next time won't be quite so accidental.

Thank you for sharing....

RecHiker

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Nice Idea

"Accidental" may be a little questionable but I guess that's allowable even though it's obvious she'd been wanting to get ahold of his cock for some time. Let's get her fucked next chapter as my erection is causing just a little trouble!

Rugrat60Rugrat60over 9 years ago
Nicely Done

Interesting way to turn a relationship.

homerjayhomerjayover 9 years ago
short but sweet

thanks for the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
Must Better than Swimming Pool Trick

Definitely more erotic than Swimming Pool Trick story.

tongueman53tongueman53about 1 year ago

I Loved the story. She is the type of woman that could be Very Dangerous. A woman Loves having and using that kind of Power !

AlwaystabooAlwaystabooabout 1 year ago
When taboo window opens, crawl thru it

Only so many opportunities present themselves, Janet was wise to seize the moment. Billy offered perfect amount of resistance and explanation of defiant behavior towards her.

Very erotic from beginning to end.

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