All Comments on 'An Affair Waiting To Happen'

Good writing style but we're over half way through the story before we know they are related. No background, no seduction, no reason why this event occurred without the mother screaming rape. It is also lacking any character development at all. We don't know anything about their age or looks but we know exactly what their clothes look like. There's promise here, but it needs some work.

Hi ya Dee xx,

Its Tye here love , another great story you have here , its nice to see you writing again , mum n son is one of the most taboo subjects but you make it seem sort of natural to me ,lol so please keep up the good work xxx

It was a hot little incest tale! Thanks for a great read Jena.

Dee This is another great story. One of the strong points of this story is the understanding of Bueaty is in the eye of the Beholder. After all the most important sex organ is the human mind.

Lovely gentle story - love as it should be. After all don't we all love our mothers?

Ben

Sweet love between a mother and her son with erotic hot sex to boot. Just everything a story need to be great. Thanks for the very loving story

This was a nice easy simple piece, but very sexy and very tenderly done.

love reading your stories ... always give me erection make me so horny

The taboo nature of the category is short-changed by your habit of not really introducing your characters. You, often as not, start near the ending and steamroll the readers through their single paragraph mating to reach the unsurprising revelation that the couple are M/S lovers.

This seems like your formula. To rely on the "shocking" revelation which shocks no one. Taboo passion only works if we know who they each are and can imagine their dilemma as their feelings are revealed and the physical encounters evolve.

Two people meeting up and then having a screw, and, by the way, SURPRISE it was his mum all along???

At best, these are brief descriptions for story IDEAS, not full stories.