All Comments on 'An Afternoon With Denise'

Great Job with this story. You kept the passion building thoughtout. Hope you will add more in other chapters.

Maybe he brings an old college girlfriend with him sometime, or maybe she dominates hubby, and then he dominates her and hubby?

It is terrible when the only negative one can list is a desire for more. Great storyline, Great storytelling, Great editing. Overall: WELL DONE!!!!!!!

this is a really exciting author. my suggestion to him is to write more stories.

this is incredible. where have you gone? did you stop writing. this is so hot i want my bf to read it.