All Comments on 'An Angel's Soul'

Angel schmoop. :)

Great story!

Was this a repost from Lit or another site? I have read this before somewhere.....

Great story. :) And welcome to Lit!

~M

Other than the overuse of the word 'twittered' that was a beautiful submission.

I was fine with twittered...I have birds so I liked the description of his 'angel noises' that way. :)

Despite our having read the angel becomes human story before, I think this was well-written and I liked both characters. I might have liked to see Cole developed a bit more, have us see what he does at work and give us a better idea of what makes him who he is. Maybe show us the difference in where he was workwise. Was it only losing Daniel that made him stop being a workaholic?

I was glad you had Cole recognize his feelings toward Raziel in the end. I also might have liked to see how Raziel was dealt with in Heaven. I'd have liked to be in on his disciplinary meeting and find out what happened over those 3 weeks. How did he become human? :) Was his love for cole fated or was it the abberation it was seen as? Did it really never happen?

Sweet story overall.

I like it. It's cute. I do wonder if they will have more adventures together. The thought of loving someone so deeply is a good one. Keep it up.

Beautiful story

This is so beautiful, your writing is amazing and i love the plot

Hope, Faith and Love. The strongest of which is Love. It matters little what gender or race it is as long as it is Love.

May the Gods be with you.